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Hello sara how are you Ihope yore fine .iam on holiday in London with my best frend Ary.Today we want to go shopping and I want to buy some clothis and Iwant to go to see big ben Icome back on monday and Iwell see you on monday . bye
hi moss wish you enjoy your holiday with your friends.oh you told me that you saw lots of natural things in the meauseam this are very attractive.oh yeah i also spend my last holiday with my friend it was really beautiful,we saw the oldest things in yourk meauseam.then we saw a movie and we enjoy the movie.wish we spend our next holiday togeather enjoy your self my friend
Hello Waffa! It seems you liked London.I think London is very nice city.There are meny interesting museums and exhibitions.I like so much the parks in London.I hope that I will go to London next holiday.
Hi weffa i think you are still in London who is it could you explain about the Weather did you enjoy in your holiday . Last year I went in Italy and I like it
Hi Danuta how your weekend? I hope you fine and you family :)Me and my daughter we was spend time together in home,we tidy garden and jump skipp.See you. Bye...bye
hi waffa i like to go to London but not every time. I know London is very nice city but it is very busy city. I dont like that and London is very expensive. I like Leeds because Leeds very quiet and clean and i like to visit other city on holiday. bye
Hi Birivan how are you?You are fine?Last sunday i went to London for holiday actualy with my husband and my baby.I saw lots of things such us under ground train,London Eye, House of parliment,London bridge, Backin place. It was very intresting for me because it was first time in my life. We enjoyed it. We were in Wellington Hotel for four days then we came back on wendesday at five o'clock.
yesterday I am went to london. with my dauaghter becuse sied thelondon is very nice city. there are many interesting museums. after four hoursarrived in london. the weather was very nice. then we take some time for rest. after that we went to restuarent forlunch and then we went to all locals the pirrty and nice. we was very pleasd for travel to london nice city and history city. I hope that will go to london next holidy.
Hello everyone How are you? I am on holiday in London with my frends. They are coming from Italy. I want to go with them to shopping. Then I want to go Hyde Park or Restorant to eat something because, I will feel Hungry.After then I want to go see big beg? I will come back on monday. see you ok then?thu 14 aPR
hi eweryone,i,m see more of people waz in london.i,m will got this weekend to london.it,s good you are to divide expierence about london.that will help me to see places of interest...
Hello Every one I think Leeds is nice city. I am going to visit some firends every week or every month. I like holiday because i have free day or free time. I also think alot about my free time like writing or reading because that helps me in class. same
Hello Nadeem how are you.and how are your faimley.i am going for holaday to Turkey are ou coming with me.I here it is very nice countery.There is very nice weather in Turkey now.Me and my faimley are going on 15th june.If you want to come most well come.It cost about £300 for weekend.I think thas not bad.If you redy ring me back.bay.
I went weekend to Manchester with my family. We went to the bus station.The weather was very bad because sky was very cloudy and rain with windy travel was difficult. After that about two hours we arrived at coach station in manchster but weather was very nice after that we took some time for rest and then we went to restaurent for a meal. After that we went to zoo to see some wild animals and domastic animals. Then we came back to bus station.
Hi!Aliya how are? I hope you are well.Iam on holiday in london and I'm staying with my brother Masuud.Often he is working but this week he doesn't. He is on holiday so we are vising different places in London. Today we are going to shopping and we are also planning a picnic in the park.It's will be interesting. see you next Monday in college!Best wishes sahara.
hi Ahmad I went to London in my holiday it was very nice I mean every things looked romantic weather was shiny people were friendly I told you to join us but you didnt if you joined you would enjoy too.OK Ahmad Iam coming tomarrow and I show you the clips and pictures . Bye see you soon
Five years ago I went to holiday to Tenerife with my family.We flew from Latvia in March when there was cold and was snowing.Six hours later we were in Tenerife where the weathe was worm about +25 degrees. At next day we rented a car and drove around of the island.Sometime we stoped in the places which liked us.We were near the volcano Teide and admired beautiful view. It was a surprise for me, because I never saw any volcano before.We enjoyed that Holiday very much.I'm sure we will go to Tenerife agein.
I went with my family to London in December. I visited my cosines house we went together to big Ben it was Christmas day we took lots of pictures in there and lots of people was in there to watching a firelighter. It was very nice day for me because I’m very interesting with my cosines after the firelighters finished we came back home at 3.30am.I hope to go next Christmas is well. Thanks
I want to speak about my last weekend. I told my friend in my class what are you doing in this weekend? I went with my family to Huddersfield for visited my some cousin. I was very happy because I visit my cousin long time I didn’t see my cousin. I went with my cousin to shopping in Huddersfield and bought some food for BBQ.I did finish shopping and came back home and my mum and cousin start for cook BBQ.I very enjoyed in Huddersfield with my cousin. I came back to Leeds on Sunday with my family.
Last weekend I was in London in London Brige watching a fotbal match, I was In the Chelsea stadium watching Cheseal vs Bolton that was a nice game but Chelsa draw and Manchester United won The match again Wigan in the JJB Stadium and that considers Man U Champion of the Premier Ligue month my countrs is coming to play in The Wembly Stadium and I'm going to watch that match.
Hello Ramzan how are you and hows your family .I hop every body is ok. Last Sunday. I went to Farmingland with my friend .We went by car .We saw different kinds off rides. We went on some rides. We really liked it but one ride is very dangerous .We went on that its took up too high and its stop for little while and then came don too fast. We all scared after that we went to zoo .We saw different kinds of animals and we really enjoyed it.
they pay me every month . not every week so i had to work for fou week befor i got any money nobody told me that at the inervie so befor i start a new job, don,t forget to ask about this......
Last week was holiday. We were walking the peak with my grilfeirand and we started take about her new college. She to tell me she likes and we started think anther think like. Part time with my girlfriend’s we had one problem thpugh.when I first start in my job. In big shop, they pay me every month. Not every week so I had to work for four week before I got any money nobody told me that at the interview so before I start a new job, don’t forget to ask about this......
hello AZAD how are and your family.i wish to you and your to bee fine . i went to birmingham last week . i sow all my freinds and i enjoyed my holiday .really i liked because it is nice city when iwas there i played football with my freids after that we went to tha cenima tha movis was hurrar when we were watching tha fire arram was ringing than we left out thacenima but there wasnot any fire
Hello!My last holiday it was on 13 April 2008.I went with my family to Scarborough.I drove my care so journey take wasn't long.I remember it was sunny but chilli day.We spent all day walked and collect shell beacuse Scarborough is very beautiful town situated on the North Sea.There was small street with shops and a lot of hotels so this town is very laud and busy.However I very enjoyed and my family too.
I would like to tell you about my holiday last year, I went to Italy, and I spent month there and it was great. The weather was very good and I really enjoyed. Also I could visited a lots of places. I want to tell all the reader that is very good to have break or holiday at the end of year, It would change your life
Hello evrynoe. Mohammed can you pase my messege to my class room. I would like to comper Bradford and Leeds. I like Bradford more than leeds because in Bradford i saw lotof thing from my country. But in Leeds if i want to buy something form my country they dont havet; On the other hand Leeds is more beautiful than Bradford . But for halal shoping Bradford is betrthan Leeds because oll the shops there are halal. I thing Leeds is begar than Bradford, olso there are more parks and shops nice pelace. Finally, am living in Leeds for five years. See you soon from azad.
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Hello sara how are you Ihope yore fine .iam on holiday in London with my best frend Ary.Today we want to go shopping and I want to buy some clothis and Iwant to go to see big ben Icome back on monday and Iwell see you on monday . bye
hi moss wish you enjoy your holiday with your friends.oh you told me that you saw lots of natural things in the meauseam this are very attractive.oh yeah i also spend my last holiday with my friend it was really beautiful,we saw the oldest things in yourk meauseam.then we saw a movie and we enjoy the movie.wish we spend our next holiday togeather enjoy your self my friend
Hello Waffa! It seems you liked London.I think London is very nice city.There are meny interesting museums and exhibitions.I like so much the parks in London.I hope that I will go to London next holiday.
Hi weffa i think you are still in London who is it could you explain about the Weather did you enjoy in your holiday . Last year I went in Italy and I like it
Hi Danuta how your weekend? I hope you fine and you family :)Me and my daughter we was spend time together in home,we tidy garden and jump skipp.See you. Bye...bye
Hello Justyna how are you?I went to Poland on holiday.I visitet my family and friends. I went to shopping and the restaurant.
Hi everyone I think London is good city and I going this weekend to visit some of my friends.......
hi waffa i like to go to London but not every time. I know London is very nice city but it is very busy city. I dont like that and London is very expensive. I like Leeds because Leeds very quiet and clean and i like to visit other city on holiday. bye
Hi Birivan how are you?You are fine?Last sunday i went to London for holiday actualy with my husband and my baby.I saw lots of things such us under ground train,London Eye, House of parliment,London bridge, Backin place. It was very intresting for me because it was first time in my life. We enjoyed it. We were in Wellington Hotel for four days then we came back on wendesday at five o'clock.
yesterday
yesterday I am went to london. with my dauaghter becuse sied thelondon is very nice city. there are many interesting museums. after four hoursarrived in london. the weather was very nice. then we take some time for rest. after that we went to restuarent forlunch and then we went to all locals the pirrty and nice. we was very pleasd for travel to london nice city and history city. I hope that will go to london next holidy.
Hello everyone
How are you? I am on holiday in London with my frends. They are coming from Italy. I want to go with them to shopping. Then I want to go Hyde Park or Restorant to eat something because, I will feel Hungry.After then I want to go see big beg? I will come back on monday. see you ok then?thu 14 aPR
hi eweryone,i,m see more of people waz in london.i,m will got this weekend to london.it,s good you are to divide expierence about london.that will help me to see places of interest...
Hello
Every one I think Leeds is nice city. I am going to visit some firends every week or every month. I like holiday because i have free day or free time. I also think alot about my free time like writing or reading because that helps me in class. same
Hello Nadeem how are you.and how are your faimley.i am going for holaday to Turkey are ou coming with me.I here it is very nice countery.There is very nice weather in Turkey now.Me and my faimley are going on 15th june.If you want to come most well come.It cost about £300 for weekend.I think thas not bad.If you redy ring me back.bay.
I went weekend to Manchester with my family. We went to the bus station.The weather was very bad because sky was very cloudy and rain with windy travel was difficult. After that about two hours we arrived at coach station in manchster but weather was very nice after that we took some time for rest and then we went to restaurent for a meal. After that we went to zoo to see some wild animals and domastic animals. Then we came back to bus station.
Hi!Aliya how are? I hope you are well.Iam on holiday in london and I'm staying with my brother Masuud.Often he is working but this week he doesn't. He is on holiday so we are vising different places in London. Today we are going to shopping and we are also planning a picnic in the park.It's will be interesting. see you next Monday in college!Best wishes sahara.
hi Ahmad I went to London in my holiday it was very nice I mean every things looked romantic weather was shiny people were friendly I told you to join us but you didnt if you joined you would enjoy too.OK Ahmad Iam coming tomarrow and I show you the clips and pictures . Bye see you soon
Five years ago I went to holiday to Tenerife with my family.We flew from Latvia in March when there was cold and was snowing.Six hours later we were in Tenerife where the weathe was worm about +25 degrees. At next day we rented a car and drove around of the island.Sometime we stoped in the places which liked us.We were near the volcano Teide and admired beautiful view. It was a surprise for me, because I never saw any volcano before.We enjoyed that Holiday very much.I'm sure we will go to Tenerife agein.
I went with my family to London in December. I visited my cosines house we went together to big Ben it was Christmas day we took lots of pictures in there and lots of people was in there to watching a firelighter. It was very nice day for me because I’m very interesting with my cosines after the firelighters finished we came back home at 3.30am.I hope to go next Christmas is well. Thanks
I want to speak about my last weekend. I told my friend in my class what are you doing in this weekend? I went with my family to Huddersfield for visited my some cousin. I was very happy because I visit my cousin long time I didn’t see my cousin. I went with my cousin to shopping in Huddersfield and bought some food for BBQ.I did finish shopping and came back home and my mum and cousin start for cook BBQ.I very enjoyed in Huddersfield with my cousin. I came back to Leeds on Sunday with my family.
Last weekend I was in London in London Brige watching a fotbal match, I was In the Chelsea stadium watching Cheseal vs Bolton that was a nice game but Chelsa draw and Manchester United won The match again Wigan in the JJB Stadium and that considers Man U Champion of the Premier Ligue month my countrs is coming to play in The Wembly Stadium and I'm going to watch that match.
Hello Ramzan how are you and hows your family .I hop every body is ok. Last Sunday. I went to Farmingland with my friend .We went by car .We saw different kinds off rides. We went on some rides. We really liked it but one ride is very dangerous .We went on that its took up too high and its stop for little while and then came don too fast. We all scared after that we went to zoo .We saw different kinds of animals and we really enjoyed it.
they pay me every month . not every week so i had to work for fou week befor i got any money nobody told me that at the inervie so befor i start a new job, don,t forget to ask about this......
Last week was holiday. We were walking the peak with my grilfeirand and we started take about her new college. She to tell me she likes and we started think anther think like. Part time with my girlfriend’s we had one problem thpugh.when I first start in my job. In big shop, they pay me every month. Not every week so I had to work for four week before I got any money nobody told me that at the interview so before I start a new job, don’t forget to ask about this......
hello AZAD how are and your family.i wish to you and your to bee fine . i went to birmingham last week . i sow all my freinds and i enjoyed my holiday .really i liked because it is nice city when iwas there i played football with my freids after that we went to tha cenima tha movis was hurrar when we were watching tha fire arram was ringing than we left out thacenima but there wasnot any fire
Hello!My last holiday it was on 13 April 2008.I went with my family to Scarborough.I drove my care so journey take wasn't long.I remember it was sunny but chilli day.We spent all day walked and collect shell beacuse Scarborough is very beautiful town situated on the North Sea.There was small street with shops and a lot of hotels so this town is very laud and busy.However I very enjoyed and my family too.
I would like to tell you about my holiday last year, I went to Italy, and I spent month there and it was great. The weather was very good and I really enjoyed. Also I could visited a lots of places. I want to tell all the reader that is very good to have break or holiday at the end of year, It would change your life
Hello evrynoe.
Mohammed can you pase my messege to my class room.
I would like to comper Bradford and Leeds.
I like Bradford more than leeds because in Bradford i saw lotof thing from my country.
But in Leeds if i want to buy something form my country they dont havet; On the other hand Leeds is more beautiful than Bradford . But for halal shoping Bradford is betrthan Leeds because oll the shops there are halal.
I thing Leeds is begar than Bradford, olso there are more parks and shops nice pelace.
Finally, am living in Leeds for five years.
See you soon from azad.
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